I came across this Tumblr post a while back and had to bookmark it because I always feel foolish describing clothes on women. There was a period in my writing where women always wore blouses and skirts and pretty much nothing else because I didn’t know the names of the other things. I still have that problem, and I’m a grown ass man. Thankfully, you don’t have to suffer as I did. Check out the full post here: http://elphabaforpresidentofgallifrey.tumblr.com/post/165929456848/themistrustfulmistress-decorkiki-a-visual
Gripping plot with real characters. As an ardent sci-fi fan I always appreciate it, regardless of genre, when the author invests in developing truly 3 dimensional interesting characters rather than simplistic good guys and bad guys and Verastiqui delivered. Then he took these characters on an intricate fast paced tale of human passion and growth while trying to paint one picture of where the slowly dissolving line between virtual vs. physical reality might bring us. obviously I enjoyed it.
A well executed, well edited, fluidly written, difficult to put down, pleasure to read.